lets try that again! (newb)

[craggle18]

right lets try again shall we, sorry i am new to this but heres the exact link to get my songs. I'd appreciate a review alot, cheers

craig

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=2257&alid=988

[ernzberger]

your voice is groovy
do you have two fathers named john lennon and billy corgan?

daydreams is a very good washy tune. if it were a painting it would be a water color that got left out in a light rain.before it had a chance to dry

could you smooth out that ending for us, its just too abrupt. or is that the point? it just seems out of place. also i dont feel like theres enough of that crazy stuff that happens in the beginning of the song where it sounds like an old tape machine starting up and slowing down etc. id like to see that worked in later in the song.

"i want one more daydream / just one more daydream / just you and me" yeah we all know how that feels.

good song, enjoyed listening a lot
ill be back to check out your other song later
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